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Send us original pictures in relation with cosmetics in general. Do not forget to make work your imagination.
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Good start. Nice layout & graphics!
RépondreSupprimer2 points - You're missing an introduction about your company & you have NOT identified this clearly enough as a student blog. This is important to do on the home page.
Also I want you to list the 4 -5 blogs you'll be following, the "reference blogs" in the introduction.
Remember, I'm not interested in you posting as you (as interesting as your opinions might be). I don't want you just to create a newsletter on the subject, I want you to create a role in a company / entity that speaks for that enterprise... to create sales, to position the entity as an expert in the field, etc. You will be asked to create content as if you are the spokesperson for that entity, to defend their interests, promote their objectives, etc. Who will you blog as? What is your role in the company?
What is the real-world" model for your new virtual company?